There's nothing to lose!
What's there to lose?
Painless bruise - forever tattoos.
Cold as stone though temperatures soar.
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Nice diction, wealth of imagery...your pen bled to no end.
a great feeling after reading this masterpiece...keep it up...u have a nice potential of writing poems.....chck mine too
Interesting the fight to sustain balance against addiction of any kind. Great emotion and descriptive narrative.
Drug use. I get the essence of drug use and the helpless realisation of its uselessness. Made me want to read it through a few times! : -)
...great description of solitude expressed through a wealth of imagery...great work dear