Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Poison Ink Comments

Rating: 4.5

There's nothing to lose!
What's there to lose?
Painless bruise - forever tattoos.
Cold as stone though temperatures soar.
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Sameera Alshaikh
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Yash Shinde 14 March 2014

...great description of solitude expressed through a wealth of imagery...great work dear

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Justice Uchenna Mmahi 02 April 2013

Nice diction, wealth of imagery...your pen bled to no end.

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Vishal Sharma 14 March 2013

a great feeling after reading this masterpiece...keep it up...u have a nice potential of writing poems.....chck mine too

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Danny Draper 07 March 2013

Interesting the fight to sustain balance against addiction of any kind. Great emotion and descriptive narrative.

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Stevie Taite 06 March 2013

Drug use. I get the essence of drug use and the helpless realisation of its uselessness. Made me want to read it through a few times! : -)

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