Thursday, June 27, 2019

Poison Aftertaste Comments

Rating: 5.0

And so many things that we are certain about in life. But then it comes
to the heat and sweat of a summer's day, and the questionable aftertaste
is truly in my way: of loving life, of loving you-of doing whatever it is that I do.
Now it's roll call through who did what to who.
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Julia Luber
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C F 28 June 2019

Fantastic write, honest expression of bewilderment... I think the poison you took is called something else especially if your head is up in the clouds! 10+

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Julia Luber 28 June 2019

To be honest, I accidentally ate something that was rotten, and the aftertaste acted like poison on my mind- fear, disgust, wondering what to eat to cover the taste up with. First it was called Questionable Aftertaste and PH indicated that was taken as a title already so I changed it. Thank you for reading!

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Jane Campion 27 June 2019

This poem has a bitter aftertaste.

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Julia Luber 27 June 2019

I think that's what I was going for….

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