Monday, January 21, 2013

Poison Comments

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Lying on the floor
Barely alive
Fighting to breath
Fighting for my life
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Alla Simone 22 January 2013

I should have seen through that kiss. Thats my favorite line. Like the in hindsight realizaion. Also, you carried out this metaphor well from beginning to end.

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