Monday, November 7, 2005

Poison Comments

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I try to read
but all I see
is your face.
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Genevieve Surrender
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Max Reif 08 November 2005

Yes, quite powerful. You've created a LOT of intensity in a few lines. You've really painted the nature of that kind of obsession. I wonder WHY he's poison, of course. Don't know that you need to answer in this poem. Such a paradox, you've dramatized it so well.

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Byron Headrick 07 November 2005

Sweet and powerful...good poem.

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

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