Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Poisioned Love Comments

Rating: 3.0

say it to me
it will make me feel better
what ever ur doing to me
i dont think its clever
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little angel
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Daniel Einstein 18 September 2012

This poem is very sloppy, this is critiques not criticism, maybe you can edit this poem, the message is clear but the words need to be filled correctly.

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