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I am standing on the promontory

Below me the water is having an orgasm
The fruitless boulders are hatching
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Nikhail Pandhi
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Salu Salu 29 September 2009

Good observation..........the metaphors are used in splendid way.. naturally a candid expression but insightful. 'And the sun purposefully shines so bright To hide this seductive world in its glare'......... ironically/contradictly worded......magnificient! ! ! rgrds/salu

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