Wednesday, September 2, 2015

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sun is dying
heart is drying
lips are lying
words are flying
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Fatima Obaid
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Bri Edwards 15 November 2015

its seems so much funny..............use it, i suggest. or maybe it's so much funny i don't understand use of word irony here. hmm? with so many lines ending with end, it was certainly going to be the END of the poem soon! :) :) i liked your series of -ing ending words and -y ending words. bri :)

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