I sit and remain deep in love
Thought vibrates to go far, far
To reach up to you dear ocean
But you are point I connect.
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A thought provoking and a deep expression. nicely explained your strategy.
The striving of aatman(soul) for confluence/ connect with Peramatma (The God) wonderfully conceptualized. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Our points of light connecting, connecting, To make a future bright. Beautiful thoughts in this poem, uplifting and understanding our insignificance but that can yet join the more powerful illuminated future. well deserved 10
Connecting to God point to point in mind and nature is our main purpose. By ding so we add values in life.