Sunday, June 18, 2017

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Rating: 5.0

the morning was so long ago
it has grown old before its time
it creeps along like old men do
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Barry Middleton
sea
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Dimitrios Galanis 26 July 2017

perhaps the coming night reveals the secret of infinity as morning breaks across the sea I liked this here the most...

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Nosheen Irfan 22 June 2017

A wonderful metaphoric write. You do it so well, play with nature imagery to say the most profound things. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 22 June 2017

A huge thank you. I really appreciate your praise.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2017

but then its tears began to fall for it could see its resting place the far horizon of the sea... love these lines in a meaningful envision. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Barry Middleton 20 June 2017

Thanks. That's a topic that preoccupies me at this time. The end for one man is the beginning for another.

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