the morning was so long ago
it has grown old before its time
it creeps along like old men do
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A wonderful metaphoric write. You do it so well, play with nature imagery to say the most profound things. A huge 10.
but then its tears began to fall for it could see its resting place the far horizon of the sea... love these lines in a meaningful envision. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.
Thanks. That's a topic that preoccupies me at this time. The end for one man is the beginning for another.
perhaps the coming night reveals the secret of infinity as morning breaks across the sea I liked this here the most...