Thursday, July 16, 2009

Point Of Saturation Comments

Rating: 4.9

Speak up, O mightiest mountain
On the apex extraordinaire
What height you conjure
in your Dreams?
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Vaibhav Pandey
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Vidi Writes 07 November 2009

Point of saturation comes to those Who get exhaused with their limited explore Your talk to Mountain, Sea and the might Sun.... They never have any saturation point... Brim to their power and glory.... They forever stand to show and shine. I read your poem as an inspiration To be derived to look at these mighties And learn to hold the exploration level With much varities and unlimited. Love reading it... Great write indeed.

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Seema Aarella 19 August 2009

They are the matchless wonders of nature......as u say saturated to the brim! well concieved and scripted! ...10!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2009

a well conceived concept.10 shan

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Dr Kamran Haider 17 August 2009

Vaibhav my friend, you have the ability to walk the paths beyond the reach of an ordinary soul's ability to tread... you have an extraordinary extended imagination... What a great piece you have shared with us... I am glad I read it... Thank you Regards, Kamran

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Ritty Patnaik 16 August 2009

there is a saturation point for everything, including the human mind.nature too! very well written poem which makes you wonder about the magnitude of natures saturation point.great write. ritty

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Chitra - 07 August 2009

the forces of nature and their boundless wonder..well captured in this awe-inspiring write

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Mark Nwagwu 05 August 2009

what heighth you conjure in your dreams - higher, higher, still; that's where your poetry is going, Vaibhav, to the mountain of your dreams. I liked the challenge to vastness

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Shekhar Joshi 04 August 2009

liked it.........excellent one......10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 August 2009

True, the point of saturation is beyond one's imagination, that cannot be described in words.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 August 2009

Vaibhav, this is brilliant, rhetorical outburst. there is reverence, a sense of amazement and very powerful imagery. however, there are lessons to be learnt from the mighty mountain, sea and Sun. the whole of nature speaks... 10 Mamta Mamta

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C. P. Sharma 01 August 2009

Excellent poetic outburst. I would add, Speak up, O Insatiable mind On the wings of imagination, What is your limit? CP

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 August 2009

Point of saturation be the amplitude of wisdom/greatness....nature is symbolic of this statement by her mercurial yet majestical aura...Me thinx i caught a smidgeoned lilt of Willie S., here, yes? A fine write, V.! FjR

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Maitreyee Joshi 30 July 2009

well said and so much like a pilot.the point of saturation of the sea, the mountain and the sun are hard to measure.it is boundless and so has always been intruging to the poets.a thoughtful write.

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Subroto Chatterjee 29 July 2009

Speak up, O pilotbabu! Were you inspired to write this piece when scaling new heights? I think you just did. Cheers. Subroto

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Bob Blackwell 28 July 2009

Lots to ponder here Vaibhav, some believe life itself is eternal, therefore has no saturation. Reads well thank you. Bob 10+

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

this is sort of thought provoking one isn't it vaibav? I m sort of blunt these days when it comes to serious matters.. yet i see you v crafted this well.... and at such a young age.. i see you u v develop yourself in to a great poet.. not a silly stupid one like... writing poems relating to marvel comics! ! ! lol 10 for you.... with love shan

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Ritty Patnaik 27 July 2009

there is a point of saturation in everything, even poetry.this is a beautiful poem, with a good theme which makes it so good to read.very good job, and keep it up.

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Carl Harris 27 July 2009

This is an interesting and very well expressed poem, Vaibhav, and I enjoyed reading it. Your poetic talent is impressive, and in this fine poem, seems to be going in a new direction. Carl.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 27 July 2009

this is an awesome poem... absolutely rhythmic, and with an excelllent thought. zabardast, my friend. i loved the title even more!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 July 2009

Exciting poem with multidimensional thoughts. Raises so many questions to ponder on

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