Speak up, O mightiest mountain
On the apex extraordinaire
What height you conjure
in your Dreams?
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They are the matchless wonders of nature......as u say saturated to the brim! well concieved and scripted! ...10!
Vaibhav my friend, you have the ability to walk the paths beyond the reach of an ordinary soul's ability to tread... you have an extraordinary extended imagination... What a great piece you have shared with us... I am glad I read it... Thank you Regards, Kamran
there is a saturation point for everything, including the human mind.nature too! very well written poem which makes you wonder about the magnitude of natures saturation point.great write. ritty
the forces of nature and their boundless wonder..well captured in this awe-inspiring write
what heighth you conjure in your dreams - higher, higher, still; that's where your poetry is going, Vaibhav, to the mountain of your dreams. I liked the challenge to vastness
True, the point of saturation is beyond one's imagination, that cannot be described in words.
Vaibhav, this is brilliant, rhetorical outburst. there is reverence, a sense of amazement and very powerful imagery. however, there are lessons to be learnt from the mighty mountain, sea and Sun. the whole of nature speaks... 10 Mamta Mamta
Excellent poetic outburst. I would add, Speak up, O Insatiable mind On the wings of imagination, What is your limit? CP
Point of saturation be the amplitude of wisdom/greatness....nature is symbolic of this statement by her mercurial yet majestical aura...Me thinx i caught a smidgeoned lilt of Willie S., here, yes? A fine write, V.! FjR
well said and so much like a pilot.the point of saturation of the sea, the mountain and the sun are hard to measure.it is boundless and so has always been intruging to the poets.a thoughtful write.
Speak up, O pilotbabu! Were you inspired to write this piece when scaling new heights? I think you just did. Cheers. Subroto
Lots to ponder here Vaibhav, some believe life itself is eternal, therefore has no saturation. Reads well thank you. Bob 10+
this is sort of thought provoking one isn't it vaibav? I m sort of blunt these days when it comes to serious matters.. yet i see you v crafted this well.... and at such a young age.. i see you u v develop yourself in to a great poet.. not a silly stupid one like... writing poems relating to marvel comics! ! ! lol 10 for you.... with love shan
there is a point of saturation in everything, even poetry.this is a beautiful poem, with a good theme which makes it so good to read.very good job, and keep it up.
This is an interesting and very well expressed poem, Vaibhav, and I enjoyed reading it. Your poetic talent is impressive, and in this fine poem, seems to be going in a new direction. Carl.
this is an awesome poem... absolutely rhythmic, and with an excelllent thought. zabardast, my friend. i loved the title even more!
Exciting poem with multidimensional thoughts. Raises so many questions to ponder on
Point of saturation comes to those Who get exhaused with their limited explore Your talk to Mountain, Sea and the might Sun.... They never have any saturation point... Brim to their power and glory.... They forever stand to show and shine. I read your poem as an inspiration To be derived to look at these mighties And learn to hold the exploration level With much varities and unlimited. Love reading it... Great write indeed.