Monday, September 24, 2012

Poignant Escape Comments

Rating: 5.0

I would forever be miserable
with your painting hanging on my head.
Even a hundred angels would lament
on the sadness sketched upon your eyes;
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

the words you and your and other adresseses came up several times. i susppose that is one of the big things that makes this so sensitive. very artful.

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Karen Sinclair 04 October 2012

the words written by a confident poet.... dare i say beautifully poignant.... tyvm karen

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Valerie Dohren 25 September 2012

Very sad and poignant write, much unhappiness here.

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Danny Draper 24 September 2012

We may look and yet the staring eyes in gazing return will only numb and deathly see not you or dark eternity.

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