When he hears
the gentle breeze rise
he will know it is my breath
breathing a sigh of love
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When he hears the gentle breeze rise he will know it is my breath breathing a sigh of love across a thousand miles. Wow...the lines depict a shine of hopefulness and positive mindset flavoured with deep, romantic love. I loved these lines. poets in the desert see flowers, while the rest of the world see sand You have spoken a thousand lines of love for nature and spirituality.
all the madness is but a rational response to a quite irrational universe..... as is poetry, as is poetry.
Hear hear Curtis! ! ! ! a rational response to a quite irrational universe Your poetry has a flavour of this madness Keep writing
Not, I suppose, a sand yacht? If you love boats why not build them anywhere! I used to sail and sometimes, unintentionally, on sand. Give your friend a distant kiss. He's inspired a very beautiful poem. It's the first I've read of yours and it's a straight ten. How come the Irish and the Americans seem to make the best poets? Maybe they have more adventure in their souls. Tom Billsborough
A Sand yacht Lol! ! My favourite poets are mostly Americans Tom. Of course with foreign poets things get lose in the translation thank you