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A 10 Full Vote for this Submitting. I truly have enjoyed.

CONTINUED: You asked me to read your latest poem, but I am a straight-to-the-person-type, so here is my report. Remember that you have articulated it in excellent English, and that the story is good. Here are my honest compliments: an excellently worded poem, I most enjoyed, Thomas. G.B.U. Amen.

A beautiful poem and complete content, but the poem is too long. A good poem is limited to ten syllables or a bit more. If it gets too long, it loses its power. Ah, that's what it's all about. The completeness you want to show, you make up in the following verses. Do not be too long-winded.

This is an excellent poem about all poets hope it includes me LOL Use similis metaphors and compare your nose to a blooming rose add vinegar as a metaphor it's very rich just google do not use ellipses(.....) activate your synapses use your brains write free verse or quatrain let petrichor be known the sweet smell just after the dew drops of first rain smile again and again as does PLUNE and THOMAS KANE OF COLORADO MUCH MORE Enjoy this read if you please