Sunday, May 21, 2006

Poets Dance Comments

Rating: 4.1

Poets Dance in the heart of rhythms
Discussion spoken in the pen
Energy being tampered with in the music
Limitations rarely occur in audio-silence
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Tonelius Oliver
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Gary Neazor 09 February 2022

In rhythm we dance.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 January 2022

A beautifully crafted and expressed poem. Great imagination. Poetry is very encompassing and engaging. Top Marks!

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Ruta Mohapatra 28 January 2022

The paper it's a sacrificial victim It just seems to lay still...good one! Congratulations!

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Melissa Patty 28 June 2021

Beautiful concept, loved reading this!

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Adeeb Alfateh 08 July 2019

The Poets are dancing Flaming hot ink drips from the pen The paper it's a sacrificial victim It just seems to lay still there's no escape when the Poets Dance Rhythmic heartbeats offset the confrontation of clumsy feet great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++

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tallie 02 May 2018

wow amazing i loved it so amazing i love to dance and i love poetry

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Wow..Fantastic poem beating in rhythms. Beautiful lines...very true said poets are dancing.. Poets Dance in the heart of rhythms Discussion spoken in the pen Energy being tampered with in the music Limitations rarely occur in audio-silence Artist writes from the heart of rhythms I just loved it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Manish Jain 03 September 2007

poem is really nice....you seems to b a felling oriented man..as yr words..tells

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Meggie Gultiano 03 September 2007

oh, i fell like dancing while reading this..well penned!

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Nadia Gray 16 June 2006

You made me promise I'd comment, And I am doing so right now. It is excellent. Beautiful work. Hope to read more. Just send me another message when you write another.

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***** ********* 15 June 2006

MY favorite sort of poetry Tone! Nice write. Tai

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Peter Lebuhn 29 May 2006

Bon Jour Monsieur Oliver Indeed this is a wonderful write Written with much thought 10 from me my fellow poet You should check out a couple of mine along the same genre as yours Rhythm of the Night and the exprensiolless page Keep it up keep writing you will go far booksurge.com is a good place to start with publishing Peter LeBuhn

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Anahita Tahmasbi 28 May 2006

It is a lovel and thought provoking poem, you know which words to choose and how to apply meaning, I enjoyed reading it!

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Perfection Is Flawed 28 May 2006

(my apologies for such a late comment) Indeed, the art of Poetry is not to be taken lightly at all. A lovely dance of words.

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 27 May 2006

awsome poem. ive always thought music and poetry were intertwined in one another and id never thought of poetry as tap dancing om paper. i love that imagery. i must add that i heart your name as well. it embodys the whole ' philisophical greek scholar' persona....so cool

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Toynia Edmond 25 May 2006

I love it, it expresses the music side of poetry and i like that.

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Alana Zisca Hosein 25 May 2006

I like this poem especially the lines 'To tap dance on paper is a joy one must experience to fully appreciate It’s not for the faint-hearted'

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Nagamuthu Osho 25 May 2006

Respected Poet, Sweet words are so soft to hear, so near and dear to Poet lovers. The cool and soul of the Poem makes the readers; To move and love it's origin of words... The heart beat is again beating for the Poets... God Love and bless the readers.. ur's cordially, n.k.osho

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Konjit Berhane 25 May 2006

weLL done Tonelius great poem no one could have done it better **KoNi**

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Ernestine Northover 24 May 2006

A lovely combination of poet and pen. Very well described and a pleasure to read. Love Ernestine XXX

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