Too much of love...
erodes the poem
repetition also
seemingly
becomes at times jarring
write like I do
''khwaabh mein aap kee hanssee
jaan lelegee
saree duniya kee
khwaabh mein
app uskoe love karoe
ya na karoe
pehchaaaaan jayengay sabhee ashiquee
aapkeeee
behanaajee''
Trying urdu poetry please
''muaff karna agar
pairr humney rakh diya
beyond jharna
learning ad mixture also
English Hindi Urudu
MEANING E H U
To much of love initiates creativity and we gain power of feelings. Learning gives creativity and beauty in life. Language and poetry are associated. This is an interesting poem shared...10
hahaha thank you I hope you really mean it ILLTIJAH HAE AAP SEY HUMAREE NAZMEIN PADDHEEIN KABHE KABHEE SHUKRIYA JI
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful ad mixture of EHU.... creative poet.