Tuesday, March 21, 2023

Poetry Wrote Me - 38 Comments

Rating: 4.8

Poetry wrote me
They fought many battles...and won
War for peace...elusive...lifelong
Finally...freedom...at a price
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Richard Wlodarski
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 March 2023

In the annals of history, freedom always comes with a price. Peace might come so elusive but with courage, perseverance and determination, it will be achieved even through war. A great poem brilliantly crafted.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2023

In total agreement with you, Rose Marie! My poetess friend, THX so much for such a high appraisal of my poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 March 2023

The short but very profound series, It depends on our own opinion of how we read this poem, to me it is quite conceivable, Top scores, Richard and thank you so much for sharing this precious and important sequel

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2023

Sylvia, we are all searching for freedom and peace of mind. My clients had utilized other methods to try to reach these goals...and they failed. Most were successful with the proper use of their subconscious minds. My poetess friend, THX so very much for your continued positive support.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 22 March 2023

freedom finally but no peace!

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2023

Mahtab, tragically, in our lifetime, there will always be warring nations. They must learn that war is NEVER a solution. Freedom, love and peace are the TRUE solutions.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2023

2) All of my clients were at war with themselves. Finally, they had found freedom and peace of mind.

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M. Asim Nehal 22 March 2023

And we all are paying the price. Superb poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 March 2023

War of any kind...costs us all! THX for your very positive comment re: my poem, Dr Nehal. .

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Life is a battle with oneself, and peace is to be achieved, again, with oneself. Sure, Richard, our love for poetry would see us through all the hard times. Top score

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Richard Wlodarski 22 March 2023

Poet Menon, we are very fortunate to have poetry as a pillar of support. Some of my clients did not have very strong supports in their lives.I salute them for having had the courage to follow through with hypnotherapy.

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Pallavi Tripathi 22 March 2023

I wrote something like this too but yours is so much better! !

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Richard Wlodarski 22 March 2023

THX so much, Pallavi. I would like to read that poem.

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Jayne Louise Davies 22 March 2023

Well done Richard! Top marks.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 March 2023

THX very much, Jayne!

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M.J. Lemon 22 March 2023

Fantastic, Richard! I think here you're channeling Rodriguez and Phil Ochs. This is a brilliant series, my friend.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 March 2023

M.J., it's a great honour to be channeling the immortal Phil Ochs. I wasn't familiar with Rodriquez, so thanks to you, I started listening to him on Spotify. Very strange that he wasn't a success in the US...especially since he was a huge success in Australia and South Africa.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 March 2023

2) Sold more records than Elvis Presley in South Africa...wow! My good poet friend, Many THX for bringing him to mine attention. And for believing this to be a brilliant series.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 March 2023

Worthy of a Bravo and an Encore! ! ! ! ! !

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Richard Wlodarski 21 March 2023

Bravo AND an encore...starting to feel like Leonard Cohen! Can't thank you enough, LeeAnn!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 March 2023

Finally...freedom...at a price....meaningful dear friend.5 stars and to my favorites

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Richard Wlodarski 21 March 2023

Dillip, THX so very much for believing it to be meaningful. And for liking it enough to add to your favourites!

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