So, why is this a great poem?
Let me try to explain.
First, notice there's no rhyme.
Rhyming is for children.
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Rabindranath Tagore wrote "the difficulty a poet faces is just that words have meanings. Poet tries to suppress the meanings using rhymes and metres so that the feelings manifest themselves "(not the exact words, wrote from memory) .. Your poem echoes
Yes, I understand, for there is nothing as complicated AS LIFE, itself.. Thank you...
2) Your poem echoes the famous words of Tagore