Thursday, February 26, 2015

Poetry That Soars Comments

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Getting nowhere in life, yet writing poetry that soars
into other people's lives honestly and truthfully.

Always unedited, pure and innocent, writing in this
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 26 February 2015

This poem asserts what you do best - write rhapsodies as the ancient Greeks called poems of celebration. This is a vibrant and direct ARS POETICA which displays the very principle of composition that you are citing. Your pairs of adjectives pure and innocent and adverbs honestly and truthfully explain your position unambiguously. And I like the closing stanza which launches us into space.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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