Sunday, July 19, 2015

Poetry! Take A Break! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Purple sage and wild flowers
Scent the pristine air.
Wandering clouds in blue sky
Send scattered signals
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 30 October 2016

favorite lines so far: I give myself away to fatigue and silence Wishing to take a nap in nature's lap. .............showing your age? :) :) Poetry! Take a break! ..............i'm glad to see you are at least trying to control the urge to be poetic! a very interesting and comforting stroll we've taken together with this poem! to MyPoemList it goes! bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 31 October 2016

Thanks Bri. It's been more than a year since I wrote that poem. Seems like poetry has taken a break from me now. Muses's grace disappeared!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 July 2015

The ego of a poet that makes to approach the essentialities of making a verse.Loved reading the poem.

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

Enjoyed your ramblings into Nature's interior pockets! Though the trek can be a little tedious, there is the cool shade of trees in which you can relax! In such moments poetry fills your heart..... Now store up all beautiful images and give vent to them one after the other in beautiful verse! Lovely poem! A10

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