Poetry's Golden Day Comments

Short beautiful good, dont forget to wine it as Okocha... Good job!

The measure of life's wealth, most succinctly scribed by you. A wonderful motivation.

Nice one.keep it up

Nice.Hope Allah bless to collect pollen-grain(from social life to make honey like poems.

yeah it's like a gold..and the last line was i really superb! : -) »so close«

modal poetry... i was expecting this from you.. thanks for sharing

Great philosophy of life, Asif. And really well expressed.

You're a model, dude.

Short but to the point Asif, particularly like the last stanza. Good one.

Oooo, that is well good! ! Be proud of this piece! ! :)

I like this piece. It is fresh and simple

really fascinating.especially the ending and the sense of humor behind it.also your mind is too rich and powerful. thank you for invitation Asif.i always enjoy reading your works and poems.

Poetry seems to have become the message and motivation of your life! ! Very good!

nicely put. i am too like you

Lovely poem, you live for creativity, your art, your soul!

Thanks for inviting me into your poetic world. I have read your poem Poetry''s Golden Day It is a great piece of work. The words flow well, in a way that capture the attention, not only of poets like me but all of your readers. It is a really nice poem. Continue to good work. While you are in this great poetic arena, would you be kind enough to take a look at my poem War and the elucive peace and feel free to comment. Thx.

nice enjoyed.. theme is similar to mine in poem 2BE.. do read!