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With opening of box attention is drawn, Suddenly runs chill and stands withdrawn,

With opening of box attention is drawn, Suddenly runs chill and stands withdrawn,

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends,

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings,

So much pleasure in accepting the greetings, Promises to see and forward to meetings,

So much pleasure in accepting the greetings, Promises to see and forward to meetings,

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends,

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings,

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings, Promises to see and forward to meetings,

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends,

an original poem! I liked the style!

formed on quite ne pattern...10

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poetry in new form....10

lovely poem and good one with impession...10

it is very good way of putting it....10

new style and very good one....10