Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, July 24, 2009

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Day starts with good wishes from the friends,
Gives feeling as if world never ends,
So much pleasure in accepting the greetings,
Promises to see and forward to meetings,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Reshma Punjabi 22 October 2009

With opening of box attention is drawn, Suddenly runs chill and stands withdrawn,

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Umesh Lalvani 21 October 2009

With opening of box attention is drawn, Suddenly runs chill and stands withdrawn,

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Chetna Purohit 21 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends,

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Pami Panchal 21 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings,

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Sita Kesri 18 October 2009

So much pleasure in accepting the greetings, Promises to see and forward to meetings,

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Sadia Hussain 16 October 2009

So much pleasure in accepting the greetings, Promises to see and forward to meetings,

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Lalvani Rekha 16 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends,

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 15 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings,

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Sachin Goswami 15 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings

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Twinkle Vohra 14 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings, Promises to see and forward to meetings,

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Ramdulari Sinha 13 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends, So much pleasure in accepting the greetings

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Sita Kesri 13 October 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends

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Kamli Kamal 11 September 2009

Day starts with good wishes from the friends, Gives feeling as if world never ends,

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an original poem! I liked the style!

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Radha Seth 21 August 2009

formed on quite ne pattern...10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 15 August 2009

it is very good attempt....10

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Suresh Vakil 12 August 2009

poetry in new form....10

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Chaul Vania 10 August 2009

lovely poem and good one with impession...10

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Durga Sethani 10 August 2009

it is very good way of putting it....10

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Rupa Shah 10 August 2009

new style and very good one....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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