Friday, September 29, 2006

Poetry Practice (Kids) Comments

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I have a little brown-eyed horse
it bites me from behind,
shows neither mercy nor remorse
I wish my horse were kind.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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.. what a contrast indeed, all wirtten in nursery-style, masterful rhyme. I know a fine, upstanding man I see him on this site And he will do what'er he can to acheive that which is right! t x

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Danny Reynolds 29 September 2006

A heinous crime indeed, and snot likely to be solved soon! Danny

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***** ********* 29 September 2006

Wow what a contrast Herbert, the poem started off so sweetly and ended in mire with mud slung left right and at the centre of the in house practice! lol Nice one, Tai, grinning at you, about that problem, nothing is unsolvable! have patience.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 29 September 2006

And I like this 'Nehrlich' rhyme! That completes with the very last line! Well done. L

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