Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Poetry Night Comments

Rating: 3.2

stop playing like you love when you really dont,
stop playing like you gone do when you really wont.
a bunch of temptation no inspiration,
gotta rest up for what there's no celebration.
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Ebi Robert 08 July 2011

I like the flow of words, really great i must say.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 04 July 2011

Love the passion of your poem...Be strong! Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Urshula Davis 13 June 2011

Girl i'm feelin this i can also relate! ! Man this world crazy!

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Elizabeth Fletcher 11 June 2011

I loved your poem. All of what you said was honest and real. It was raw feeling without hesitation. That was awsome :)

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Hilton Ball 06 June 2011

ahhh i like the way you write i think i will write a poem just for you rite now thanks for the insperation

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