If you’ve ever tried to catch a cloud,
to ride a rainbow,
to save the sunshine in a jar.
Then you know how it feels
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AND THAT WINDOW IS WIDE OPEN FOR OPPORTUNITY FOR YOU STARR...FINE PENNING IN ALL BASIC ASPECTS OF PRINCIPLED VERSE. YOU ARE MOST DEFINITELY A RISING S T A R R ! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Splendid Starr! Yes you see all the windows and beyond that when you open your window.You are having a magical window indeed.
Now let me see...what do I like/love about this poem.........ummm.................... still in thought.......umm...........OH YES>>>>>>>>EVERYTHING 10! Love Duncan X
The window you have opened to share with us all. Thank you for the splendid view. An OUTSTANDING write. You are amazing! BRAVO! Patricia Gale
This is incredibly beautiful and vulnerable, the beginning caught my attention, the middle kept it, and the ending sent shivers down my spine.