Sunday, June 11, 2006

Poetry-My Window Comments

Rating: 3.7

If you’ve ever tried to catch a cloud,
to ride a rainbow,
to save the sunshine in a jar.
Then you know how it feels
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>Starr Williams<
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Graciela Silva 04 September 2018

This is incredibly beautiful and vulnerable, the beginning caught my attention, the middle kept it, and the ending sent shivers down my spine.

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AND THAT WINDOW IS WIDE OPEN FOR OPPORTUNITY FOR YOU STARR...FINE PENNING IN ALL BASIC ASPECTS OF PRINCIPLED VERSE. YOU ARE MOST DEFINITELY A RISING S T A R R ! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Nimal Dunuhinga 12 June 2006

Splendid Starr! Yes you see all the windows and beyond that when you open your window.You are having a magical window indeed.

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Duncan Wyllie 11 June 2006

Now let me see...what do I like/love about this poem.........ummm.................... still in thought.......umm...........OH YES>>>>>>>>EVERYTHING 10! Love Duncan X

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Patricia Gale 11 June 2006

The window you have opened to share with us all. Thank you for the splendid view. An OUTSTANDING write. You are amazing! BRAVO! Patricia Gale

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>Starr Williams<

>Starr Williams<

Spring Branch> TEXAS :)
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