Thursday, September 12, 2013

Poetry My Happiness Comments

Rating: 4.8

How can I feel so lost in my own land?
Like a forbidden in a foreign world
Heartbroken beyond repairs
Tears falling down endlessly
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 March 2014

They can never break the flow of thoughts that erupts like a volcano, the flow of emotions that are majestic like African waterfalls. Soze bakugqibe kaloku nkosazane, ngitsho bangakhu biza igqiyazana soze bawophule umphefumulo wakho, kwaye I kamva lakho likwezakho izandla. Simnandi esi sihobe sindikhumbuza umhlobo wam, intokaPotelwa lena eKapa lodumo. Siya_! !

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Litan Dey 11 October 2013

Dear friend this is a very good poem and i loved this sweet piece.Have a great day

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Lucifera Santez 22 September 2013

amazing, keep on writing. :)

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Hazel Durham 15 September 2013

A beautiful write full of your inquenchable spirit and a great attitude!

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Lee Mack 12 September 2013

spirit is your pronoun if you chose in a few poems in others the poem can be pronoun you are maturing well

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