Poetry My Brush (First Non Rhyming) Comments

I like it you did good for your first non rhyming poem

You sense beauty, ... Of soaring eagles, circling, watching Over white tipped mountains, towering Standing proud, with valleys at their feet With lush green tree tops looking up in awe nice description of beauty and the majesty of eagles. u have a descriptive mind and non rhythmic lines are the best to describe it. thank yu. God bless you

You sense beauty, ... Of soaring eagles, circling, watching Over white tipped mountains, towering Standing proud, with valleys at their feet With lush green tree tops looking up in awe nice description of beauty and the majesty of eagles. u have a descriptive mind and non rhythmic lines are the best to describe it. thank yu. God bless you

Excellent from top to bottom. Continue with the non-rhyming pieces, you might have stumbled onto something.

the imagery is awsome i can totally picture what you are describing. in stanza four you could replace peeps with peek. if you want to, just a thought. great poem =)

I see a beautiful painting.

Well-written...wonderfully thought out.