Sunday, October 22, 2017

Poetry..Just 'floury'thoughts? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes my mind is like a bag of white flour
Dusty, drab, messy, pulverized...
Nothing happens and it vacations in its cranium.. just waiting,
Waiting, for something to move and inspire it…
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Shaun Cronick 15 May 2020

Lodigiana great analogy so cleverly depicted and I truly love the last closing line. And yes it is easy to cheat and rewrite and shape anything original that's gone before, a tweak here a slight shift and change there. Then its Goundhog Day writing and kidding yourself. It's never easy dreaming up fresh originality. 10++ and keep writing Lodigiana even your writer's block experience is superb! Shaun. x.

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Ah writers block is such a curse..Thank you for reminding me of this one..Love your comments as always my Friend xx

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