Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Poetry In Motion Comments

Rating: 4.9

I'm music, I breathe to inspire
I'm all that engrosses the soul,
As water to earth, as wind to fire,
I breathe life into a song.
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kyvin Nash
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 April 2021

A magnificent composition! Admired

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 April 2021

Brilliantly put

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 April 2021

I'm poetry in one piece.. hardly a few poets can express this way

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2021

as music is to ears, the days are to the years.enjoy music here

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kyvin nash 07 April 2021

Thank you Rebecca & Susan, this is one of my favourite poem, thank you for voting and comments, i just cant reply to individuals dont know whats the problem, but i will be in touch.

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Rebecca Navarre 03 April 2021

Absolutely beautiful! .. Breathtaking! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Susan Williams 27 March 2021

Part 2. You are music indeed, my friend! ! ! ! ! Fantastic write! ! !

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Susan Williams 27 March 2021

Wow! ! ! This poem is a classic from beginning to end. 5 stars and I favorited it

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David Wood 14 January 2021

You breathe life into poetry as well! a really good poem

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kyvin nash 14 January 2021

I'm glad you've taken time to read...thanks a lot David Wood.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2021

Wow! Loved this gem. " I'm poetry in one piece, emanating from the deepest essence. " great. Five stars is nothing before this marvel

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kyvin nash 08 January 2021

Thanks a lot Unnikrishnan...your comment motivates even more, thanks again for the ratings

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2018

Fine and lofty verse, elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Your knack for penning poems in beautiful rhyme scheme is not only appropriate, but also poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Kyvin Nash 16 November 2018

Thanks Mr Dike, your words are inspiring, they keep me believing that one day i'll be a good poet too!

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Kyvin Nash 20 March 2017

Fabrizio thank you so much!

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 September 2015

I'm poetry, when my heart opens it bleeds. what a beautiful image.. I've enjoyed all your verse, but this is simply great.. Thanks for sharing. fueds = you mean feuds..

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Kyvin Nash 11 September 2015

I'm truly pleased as well Fab thank you for the point of correction.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Amazing poem! Totally rhythmic, flowing so gently and beautifully into this poem. Have always loved the words of your title, have a poetry site online with that title. Music is essential, I believe in the world of poetry. Everything I write is written while listening to music. It seems to exude poetry in it's rhythms, tempo, notes and tones. As does this beautiful poem exude rhythm. I love it! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Kyvin Nash 03 September 2015

Roseann thanks it means a lot to me, your words are inspiration and I consider your point of a poetry site with this title, 'poetry in motion ' actually Is what makes me writer everyday I feel like everything around me is poetry, and I have to write about it more and more to give it life in a deferent perspective, thanks for sharing your thought!

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