Wednesday, September 6, 2017

Poetry In Moon Comments

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The night birds lost millions of generations,
attempting again and again and failing every time,
dreaming to think a poem sitting on the mountains of the moon
dreaming to write a poem swimming in the rivers of the moon
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Indira Renganathan 22 September 2017

There are lots of poems on the moon... yours stands out with an exceptional imagery....exciting indeed...thank you for sharing this here..thanks for your kind comment on my poem too...God bless you

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 September 2017

Beautiful poem flowing gently in air. Its the passion which makes one write poems. Loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

Again I have liked to read this beautiful poem and I am amazed about your expression and imagination to sit in mountains of moon and writing poems. This poem is really very attractive and reflects your skillful poetic ability. Swimming in the rivers of moon and praising kind, beneficent and merciful God value more in such poetry writing. Angel like you writes the most beautiful and the most suitable poem writing a letter to God. Love in moon materializes with passion and love. But true love still motivates mind towards God. Excellently penned poem this is definitely. Revisiting this I am feeling very glad.

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Valsa George 07 September 2017

Poets from time immemorial have been enamoured by the beauty of the moon and countless poems have been written on the different faces moods and phases of the moon! A beautiful and highly imaginative write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

Do you know you are now at this larger moon? The most beautiful and the most suitable for writing a poem, and, for sending it on the air... .. yes, earth is the beautiful moon which is the best place for writing poems. It is a beautiful poem on earth with stunning expression. Thanks for sharing.

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