Monday, May 8, 2006

Poetry Ii. Comments

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taking a trip
on a lazy sunday afternoon
walking down the hot country lanes
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Ballerina With Fins
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William Jackson 12 May 2006

I love playing with combinations of prepositional phrases. Good poem. Nice Read.

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Goldy Locks 08 May 2006

nicely written! & i like your pen-name Best care, Sus.

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