Saturday, April 11, 2015

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First the perspiration on the forehead
Then a tense outburst of inner emotions
Followed by a profusion of mingled words
Struggling against themselves to frame thought
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Pasquale DiMeola
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2019

Agitating uncontrollably through the veins Anytime, anyplace, the urge confronts Literally amok in a state of overload Brain throbbing Eyes dilating and focus.. a very good poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 20 June 2018

The intricacies of poetic creations are aptly captured in the poem. Well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive diction with insight. Thanks for sharing Pasquale.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 November 2017

First the perspiration on the forehead Then a tense outburst of inner emotions Followed by a profusion of mingled words Struggling against themselves to frame thought....... when the poet becomes pregnant with thoughts and emotions, , , , , , , , , this happens....... you have pictured it well my dear poet. thank you. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 November 2017

a tense outburst of inner emotions Followed by a profusion of mingled words Struggling against themselves to frame thought. picturing exactly the struggle of a poet when a poem is born........thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony

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Kelly Kurt 11 April 2015

Intense! The need to write. Thanks for sharing, Pasquale

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An awesome poem about the human thoughts. likes.

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Pasquale DiMeola

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