Poetry Comments

beautiful piece. caugh my eyes cause I have on by the same name. glimpse it.

immortality of verse is sky there to watch your soul soar and fly to the hot heights of living coal mined in your person's goal

Immortality of the sky – a verse. that never end that transcended love that erected taught

Yes I do believe that verses are liberated into the sky and thus take on another dimension; The act of wrting thoughts down gives form to your thinking. Nice thoughtful poem, and succint.

I read your 'Poetry' just now.I can appreciate you better through your poems. This is a lovely poem.

I agree with Lime and Tequila below on the sky line........ Another great poem Tsira! Rogerx

The second line, the sky as merciless, makes this poem for me. I never thought of the sky in that term before, but your poem gave me a new way of seeing.