Thursday, June 26, 2014

Poetry Comments

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P|assionate
O|bservitive
E|verlasting
T|ime consuming
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Daniel Brick 10 July 2014

Hi Sana I like your choices of single words to describe what poetry means. And they form pairs that speak to each other. The 1st passionate speaks to the 6th your heart's voice. What is passion if not the heart's voice? And the two of them highlight the frequent tone of your poems. The 2nd observative and the 5th rough describe the actual process of building a poem. You take the rough data that you observe in the world around you or in the world within you and shape it artistically. Finally, the 3rd and 4th both refer to TIME and however time-consuming writing a poem can be, your efforts are rewarded with A POEM which is ever-lasting.

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Gbenga Amusan 26 June 2014

I cant but smile as i read this piece. great insight

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

Sana Olivia Hernandez

Roseburg, Oregon
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