Poetry Comments

Beyond thought, this haiku sings its truth simply. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Being mainly a reader and not a writer, I appreciate that you've caught one here! I've tried that stream, had the occasional bite, but after a little wriggling they usually shoot off to someone else's bait - yours I think!

Don't over-exert yourself, pal.

great imagery, Mike. the connection is a little hard to see, i say this because i'm constantly working on illuminating my union of thoughts. it always makes sense to me. ha. =) take care, Sus.