Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Poetry Comments

Rating: 2.8

I was once lost in a sea of dispair,
When I looked around no one was there.
I couldnt speak what I was feeling,
Couldnt show what I was concealing.
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Star Crossed Lady
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Kewayne Wadley 21 November 2014

Great expressions used here. Very heartfelt

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John Brown 11 October 2013

Good poem Krystal. Writing poetry is an excellent pastime, at whatever level.

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Sallam Yassin 12 December 2012

sense for our soul sound for our voice scenery for our sight fine piece

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 December 2012

A nice poem, at last u got the way

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