Thursday, November 14, 2013

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Robin Strand
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Heather Wilkins 24 August 2014

I like the form with which you wrote poem easy to read leaving is always painful

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Mac Adrone Adonay 10 February 2014

a good poem, I like the way you write it, free verse yet powerful :)

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Paul Brookes 16 November 2013

I think this is how sometime we all feel (except of course the philistines like Bri) Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2013

i guess you are new to poemhunter. welcome aboard. now i find this poem easier on me than the tree poem, but it still is not right for me. i think it is cute how it is shaped like a triangle/woman's breast/mountain-turned-on-its-side. some punctuation might help the readers. thanks for sharing. :)

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