~ POETICALLY NOETICALLY ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
04.10.09.
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I think I am dizzy lol. The words come fast and furious they just appear at you like a machine gun. I see some commentary of current life and society and yet I am worried I might have missed some. Still thinking on the words. Thought reaching write :)
Log-in ne’er Sign-in ne’er Log-out e’er Sign-out e’er a sweet poetic say..fantastic..loved the way you wrote
In the whirlpool Of duality, Why? These kind of questions have baffled mankind for ages and still these are unanswered not cuz there is no answer to that question but cuz poets like you would ponder abt it in every age and we readers would rejoice from the recital. 10/10
I only wish I could understand the full meaning of the poem. There are portions that I can grasp and other portions where I am completely lost. However I did enjoy the part that I could understand. Lynn
duality is everything it makes me know night from day and day from night else i'd be lost Nivedita, out of the soil grow huge forests one flat surface the other tall reaching to the sun duality this is deep stuff, Nivedita; compels thought and expression...of self mark
Lol With out human duality there would be no heart beats for one another. How would you define life without death etc etc. Poetry remains undefined 'Noetically'....take a wild guess?
Vivid visionary and vibe and vibrant Thanks for sharing…Ms. Nivedita
Sapere Aude [Dare To Be Wise] A similar concept of Jnana I find in Ms. Nivedita’s other poem [‘Universal Us]. Dispensed in separate canvas Enjoyed
like ghettos of the mind....our desire lives in the language we use to... Excellent lines of poetic gene of cyberspace hammock...thank you for sharing....you make my life laugh...God bless... a 10 +
Nice poem finish is: ‘Not out of life // Poetically // Noetically // Ab Imo Pectore*. [10] *From bottom of heart of poem and readers too. PO PO
full of synonyms, antonyms, rhythms and rhymes made this brilliant work sooo noticeably poetically.
Very good collation of antonyms to reflect duality.A new style of writing.Interestingly penned.
I'm getting you now Ms Nivedita Bagchi SPC.UK. & I really like your style of writing although it's all 'rap' to me, heh heh...... I'm hooked, will u throw me back in the sea or keep me dangling? ? ? ? ? Ruthie: -))))
I cant believe I read this... so great! Fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing.