Friday, June 13, 2008

Poetic Vice Comments

Rating: 5.0

Poetic Vice

Scribble, dribble, wriggle, wretch
there he sits upon his bench
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Dawn Slanker
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

An awesome piece of work

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James B. Earley 06 July 2008

That pretty well sums it up! Excellent composition.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 July 2008

the voices by the poetics still flows as the scarlet red whirs by the wine..........wonderful thought yet ingenious green, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 05 July 2008

This one has come out very well with good rhythm and rhyme...my 10

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