Saturday, November 2, 2013

'Poetic Pizza' Pieces For Poemhunter Pals....[fantasy Poem/Pizza Creation; Personal] Comments

Rating: 4.4

Kanav Justa suggested I share my pizza with PoemHunter friends,
but I’ve found, when trying to send real pizza, my wife’s computer bends.
So you PoemHunter friends will have to settle for.... slices of my thoughts.
You’ll have to settle for “Poetic Pizza” Pieces my mind and pen have wrought.
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Bri Edwards 12 November 2024

Thanks to all commenters and 'other visitors' to this Little Piece of Italy. Try another bite of Bri's Pizza. I've made plenty and plan to make plenty more! ! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2024

I've read below a bit today, back in time passed on PH, enjoying helping others to enjoy themselves here with my poems and elsewhere. : ) bri

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2024

Wonderful poem of wit and great imagination. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2024

I agree with the comments of Poet Unnikrishnan Menon. It is indeed a great gift to entertain people with amazing humor.

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Lyn Paul 04 February 2024

Dear Bri. This is your absolute best. I love it,10 years old also. Kanav had a good plan. Hope you care for the amazing hogs. See you and your wife when you arrive in Australia

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Humour comes to Bri quite naturally. It is an extraordinary gift, dear poet. Enjoyed your pizza. For, ‘imagination' Is absolutely the ‘sutablest" spread for a poetic pizza

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Bri Edwards 07 April 2024

Thanks. I hope you left some slices for the next reader! But; 'sutablest'? ? Did you mean 'stablest' aka Similar: firm solid steady secure fixed strong fast stout sturdy safe moored anchored stuck down immovable well built well constructed substantial Opposite: unstable rickety'?

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Belle Ringer 01 January 2024

Saw the word pizza in the title and was hungry. Got fed not with food but with wit and wisdom. An oldie but a goodie.

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Bri Edwards 11 January 2024

Thanks Belle Ringer! I hope it was filling. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2022

To you: attention: to ALL READERS and commenters of my poem, PAST, PRESENT, or FUTURE. Special thanks for HONEST comments, wheth

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Bri Edwards 11 January 2024

Hey, Bri, what the does 'wheth' mean, huh? ? /!

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Beach Girl 07 September 2022

Although, I was a bit disappointed when I realized your poem wasn't about real pizza.. : ) : )

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Beach Girl 07 September 2022

Bri, I really enjoyed your poem about poetic pizza. It was an ingenious way of describing you poetic methods.

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Nabakishore Dash 25 May 2022

your poetic pizza is more enjoyable poet Bri.

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Bri Edwards 11 January 2024

Thanks, Nabakishore. bri

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Richard Wlodarski 07 May 2022

Very witty and creative, Bri! Next time that I'm enjoying my charcoal pizza, I'll have to revisit this one.

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Panagiota Romios 31 October 2020

Oh, you are indeed humous...well done Bri Panagiota 5 Stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 May 2019

Bri, constantly humorous poems on the PH pöem site run, so much fun, came across this pizza verse, truly fun-making pizza, eh I mean truly fun making poem, yes, PIZZA! I have enjoyed one of your old verses. Excellent one! 10.

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Bri Edwards 11 January 2024

Thank you Sylvia. : ) Well said. bri : )

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2018

Revisiting this fascinating poem. I am craving for pizza today. This time, a pizza with lots of laughter and witty humor.

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A one of a kind write, cleverly written. A food for the brain. So delicious and yummy. Can I ask for another pizza? 10

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Professor Plum 23 April 2018

Makin' me hungry. Love it!

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Bri Edwards 11 January 2024

Eat your heart out, Mr. Professor. What does THAT mean anyway? ? ? : )

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Perdita Young 22 April 2018

So you PoemHunter friends will have to settle for.... slices of my thoughts. You’ll have to settle for “Poetic Pizza” Pieces my mind and pen have wrought. - It's So Delicious! Full of flavor and full of thought. I will surely come here more as a regular guest, whenever i feel hungry for poetry.

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Narayana Aghalaya 02 April 2018

I generally like real pizzas with peppers and lots of cheese. Your poetic pizza is new - it has me interested. I can relish it several times -unlike the real ones, which get over, i no time! Your rhymes are quite yummy! Let me try for some time and then my feedback!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2017

Liked your ‘Poetic Pizza’! I think every poet would appreciate your expression… “Instead of dough for its foundation, I use what I see and hear and think”. Most importantly, there is a comical touch with fitting rhyming words! Enjoyed the amusing piece carrying some beautiful poetic substance in it! ! Dillip

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