Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Poetic Mind Comments

Rating: 4.5

I would wish to have a mind
Like that of a poet
Being able to generate thoughts
And express them in writing.
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Jude Lavu
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Chinedu Dike 23 July 2015

Piece of elegance, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. You've captured the essence of poetry and the artistry of poets. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jude Lavu 24 July 2015

Thanks a lot @ Chinedu. I am humbled by your comments.

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2015

a very well penned write, Jude, and you've shown a poet mind, for sure.. only an advice, if I may: why all those commas..? ;) greetings from Italy

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Jude Lavu 16 July 2015

Thanks Fabrizio. It actually looks better without the commas. I really appreciate

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Abdalla Juma Shenga 16 July 2015

a very nice and creative piece i think you already have a poetic mind and you are using it well. thanks for sharing

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Jude Lavu 16 July 2015

U welcome Abdalla and thanks a lot too

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

Apparently you do have the mind of a poet, Jude

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Jude Lavu 16 July 2015

Many thanks Kelly Kurt

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