Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Poetic Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Poetry fills my days
Otherwise dull and drab
Little comfort the sun bestows
Merciless in the summer glow
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Nosheen Irfan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2020

Indeed, the poet, unmindful of all constantly produces jewels from the bottom of her mind, mesmerizing, dear poetess, A 10 Full Score To MyPoemsList. Thank you so much for sharing this well captured poem.

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Chinedu Dike 14 September 2020

Brilliant and insightful lines, focused and factual. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 July 2019

But the poet, unmindful of all Plunges into a sea of thoughts And brings out pearls from the bottom......so touching and true. A great metaphorical poem is astutely executed. Thanks again for sharing this gem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 November 2016

Verily, poetry is the life blood of a poet......10

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 10 November 2016

Lovely! Like the poem.Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

Otherwise dull and drab! ! Nice work.

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Susan Williams 15 September 2016

Every thing in me responds to this poem, Nosheen. I agree- -if writers could not write, we might as well not enjoy the sunrise or sunset, the birds winging home, the mountains beckoning in the distance, the savor of a remembered love.... writers do enrich the readers'experience of life. This poem bedazzles! ! !

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Barry Middleton 14 September 2016

A pearl! Lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 September 2016

Poetry is that sacred refuge where even things drab and ordinary acquire new meanings and dimensions and ensue forth from the poet's pen as exquisite beauty like this poem of yours. (10)

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Valsa George 13 September 2016

Yes... poetry is a balm to troubled minds....! When days become drab, a gifted poet seeks refuge and delight in the exuberance of poetic art and his/her heart is filled with lovely and whimsical thoughts.....! Thus he comes up with poetic gems.... Yes, Nosheen, we enjoy the pearls you salvage from the bottom of your heart!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2016

Sun bestows mystery and magic in imagery and this poem reflects wonderful image. Tuneless wind blows and fills mind to sing too. Amazing! ..10

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Douglas Scotney 13 September 2016

good compensation in my books

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Kelly Kurt 13 September 2016

You are one of my favorite poets here, Nosheen. This poem emphasizes why

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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