Poetic Liberation Comments

The door is there upon the breast of a bird that Finds pleasure to sing at dawn. The door, sealed with thik fog, will break open With the beam of the day.

The door is there upon the breast of a bird that Finds pleasure to sing at dawn. The door, sealed with thik fog, will break open With the beam of the day. Upon thy heart's panting passion will I dissolve and hence my liberation. .........

To see your partner happy opens the door for you to write and create. You are right, things need to be favorable for you to open the door and write with some fluency. I find that, very much so. A comprehensive poem indeed.