Tuesday, February 4, 2020

Poetic Justice Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ice upon the pond's so thin,
A callous killer has fallen in.
I tell him rescue is nevermore,
Until its surface freezes more.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2020

What a brilliant and vivid portrayal of darkness. The wickedness of men will always haunt us until the end. An excellent write beautifully crafted.

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Shaun Cronick 05 February 2020

Thank you Rose Marie for your kind and most welcome comment.I'm glad a great poetess as your good self enjoys reading a dark one now and again. And I so enjoy writing them. I thank you again good Rose Marie and take care.

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