Poetic Justice Poem by Shaun Cronick

Poetic Justice

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The ice upon the pond's so thin,
A callous killer has fallen in.
I tell him rescue is nevermore,
Until its surface freezes more.

All pitiful screams I do ignore,
His hideous crime to answer for.
I do not care he is my only brother,
For he murdered our only mother.

Tuesday, February 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,coldness,dangerous,dark,darkness,macabre,mother,murder,wickedness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2020

What a brilliant and vivid portrayal of darkness. The wickedness of men will always haunt us until the end. An excellent write beautifully crafted.

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Shaun Cronick 05 February 2020

Thank you Rose Marie for your kind and most welcome comment.I'm glad a great poetess as your good self enjoys reading a dark one now and again. And I so enjoy writing them. I thank you again good Rose Marie and take care.

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