Is it anger or is it disgust?
Is it of love or a pose of lust?
I astonish why you never turn?
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A nice poem sort of philosophical drop. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.
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Wow sublime ode the picture inspired you eloquently. Kudos for this extraordinary poem. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "
Dear poetess! Thanks for your appreciation. I have read and commented your lovely poem.
I help " her" reply for you: My emotion vapor, because i made of smoke that blown by your mouth...as if i m from cigarettes you had How could i disgust if u say so, how i can i cry...bcoz my feelings all gone vapored So thats why i didnt turn my face to you, so i can disappear without your remembering me But just as memories, that fade like cigars you had, then i am gone in your last breath of that smoke
Wow! Such a touching poetic comment in written from an Unwritten Soul. Thank you so much for your counter-inspiration.
I just love how the words are mingled together to form this gem, thank you my friend
Thank you so much for your nice feedback. But my intution forces me to write its second stanza. Can I?
here lives a succinct love which makes a path of inspiration (sometimes): path of (sometimes) !
A poem that lingers in memory for long for it has been beautifully crafted.
Dear Nair! Thank you so much for your kind words.