Monday, May 6, 2019

Poetic Inspiration Comments

Rating: 4.8

Is it anger or is it disgust?
Is it of love or a pose of lust?

I astonish why you never turn?
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Jazib Kamalvi
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A poem that lingers in memory for long for it has been beautifully crafted.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 September 2020

Dear Nair! Thank you so much for your kind words.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 June 2020

'Life is serious not haphazard way' - yes, true!

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2020

Dear Poet! Your words are really precious for me. Thank you so much.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2019

A nice poem sort of philosophical drop. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 October 2019

Dear Anil! Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

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Bri Edwards 25 August 2019

i really don't understand it. : ( bri

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2019

Something wrong with you. You may like to read the comment of Kostas Lagos. Thanks

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Kostas Lagos 20 August 2019

A poem worth of reading many times!

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 August 2019

Dear Kostas Lagos! Thank you so much for your kind words.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 August 2019

Wow sublime ode the picture inspired you eloquently. Kudos for this extraordinary poem. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2019

Dear poetess! Thanks for your appreciation. I have read and commented your lovely poem.

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

I help " her" reply for you: My emotion vapor, because i made of smoke that blown by your mouth...as if i m from cigarettes you had How could i disgust if u say so, how i can i cry...bcoz my feelings all gone vapored So thats why i didnt turn my face to you, so i can disappear without your remembering me But just as memories, that fade like cigars you had, then i am gone in your last breath of that smoke

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 July 2019

Wow! Such a touching poetic comment in written from an Unwritten Soul. Thank you so much for your counter-inspiration.

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Liza Sudina 27 May 2019

Always be inspired! Sublime poetry.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 May 2019

Dear Liza! Thanks for your words.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 May 2019

I REALLY LOVE YOUR POETRY ESPECIALLY LOVE AND LUSTY

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 May 2019

Dear Poet! Thanks for your love.

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Konab Ghumman 07 May 2019

what a beautiful poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 May 2019

Such a beautiful comment!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 May 2019

A wonderful couplet, Jazib.....10++++++++++++++

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2019

Thank you so much, Bernard, for your words, rating and plus marks.

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I just love how the words are mingled together to form this gem, thank you my friend

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2019

Thank you so much for your nice feedback. But my intution forces me to write its second stanza. Can I?

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 May 2019

here lives a succinct love which makes a path of inspiration (sometimes): path of (sometimes) !

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2019

Thank you so much, Mahtab, for your timely visit and deep comment.

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