Monday, December 25, 2017

Poetic Elf, The….[ N O T To Be Read By "Genteel" People; True Or False? ; Bri's Meanness; Long; Original Title Was " I Hate Myself "] Comments

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I hate myself.I loathe myself.I'm the worst despicable human being, ……….
AND ‘No Other' can stand me either; we ALL [from me] feel like fleeing.
It's NOT that I've grown to be repulsive; I've ALWAYS been this way.
There's no hope I'll become ‘acceptable', as my negativity is …..HERE to STAY.
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Loke Kok Yee 06 January 2018

There must be much more than what you had written here It’ll need more pages for the whole truth to be clear Your lifetime achievements go far beyond all that But all having been said, we are glad you’re like that Thanks Bri

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Savita Tyagi 29 December 2017

Hmmm! Is there any thing left out in this mischievous list of deeds! Your imagination definitely stretches like those barb wires going on for miles and miles. Thanks for a fun read!

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Laurie Van Der Hart 28 December 2017

Bri, you really had a field day with this one. What were you smoking...? The first few stanzas really made me laugh out loud. I think the meanest thing you did was put up fishing line across mountain bike trails. Tell me, did you think up all of these things at once, or build them up over a lifetime?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

You call yourself a poetic elf…”I berated ALL the other poets' poems …….at every opportunity. I pointed out their STUPID errors, but at least I did it ….all for FREE! ”. You are not an apple but surely a bitter gourd which has its own utility. I can’t comprehend how good/bad you are! It is sure, as an emblematic human being you have adhered to your own philosophy of life. Fine, you have revealed your life story that we may like or not? ?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

He was brought up somewhere else….we have heard a lot of his naughty deeds like one act you have mentioned…” I steal clothes from nude bathers at the beach while they ….bask in the sun”….But behind his every act there was a reason! (Cont..)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

You have tasted stern realities and difficulties throughout your life starting from the time of your birth! But you have enjoyed your naughtiness as well. Your story reminds me of a great human being (whom we call lord Krishna) who was born in jail, snatched away from her mother who gave him birth(Cont..)

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