Thursday, June 30, 2022

Poetic Black And Blue Period Comments

Rating: 4.8

When has he left you?
Asked aunt Zuri.
'During autumn' I replied.
That night was not old enough to let out.
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Fathimathul Hanna
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Shadrach Shehu 27 July 2022

This is beautiful!

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Hanna Abideen 30 May 2024

Thanks for your comment. Means a lot to me

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Part 3. Enjoyed reading the poem. Top score. Added to Myfavourites. And congratulations to the poet for being select Poem Of The Day.

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Hanna Abideen 30 May 2024

Thanks a bunch for your comment. Means a lot to me

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Part 2. " Streets were dense with violent worded beliefs" Heavy pains…., " My metaphors stepped out of the "… exquisite! Words rise direct from the heart! A tad too emotional…

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A superb poem. On the inhibition being coloured. Lost love? "Why should I mask poetic black? " The question reverberates across the borders of minds…

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