Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Poetasters, Or Time-Wasters Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wept a bucket of tears reading those poems.
I wept so much that my eyes went dry.
The poets had such fearful notions.
Many of them even wanted to die.
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Tan Pratonix
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Darwin Henry Beuning 12 February 2016

Tan, There is much truth in humor. You have a wonderful talent, share it with the world. Looking forward to your next poem! !

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Bill Galvin 03 October 2015

Tan, this needed to be said! ! ! I thought I was being overly critical in my judgment; but, you are correct, much of it is terrible. Not many know what wordsmithing entails.

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