Sunday, May 14, 2023

Poesy - कविता Comments

Rating: 4.5

Original Poem: Poesy
By: Freni Karaluthara
Translation By: M. Asim Nehal
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 08 August 2023

Bahut badiya translation hai.

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Sheeya Hacks 18 May 2023

I am sure you must have translated it nicely, my Hindi is not so good but can read little bit, from the comments i can make out will read original

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Rajan T Renganathan 17 May 2023

एक कवी जब अपनी कविता से बातें करने लगे तो शायद कुछ इस तरह से ही करे, कवी ने अपनी कल्पना तो एक नयी उड़ान दी है, अब original पढ़ना का समय है, आपने अति उत्तम अनुवाद किया है, बहुत बढ़िया आसिम जी

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Deepak S S 16 May 2023

Wah wah..Maja aa gaya मेरी कविता मैं तुम्हारी आँखों से देखना चाहता हूँ, इस दुनिया की जादुई सुंदरता को ~

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2023

2) Asim, sorry that I can't rate it because I can't read Hindi. I'm sure that you did a great job and deserve full marks!

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2023

Just finished reading Freni's poem and commenting on it. One of the highest forms of flattery is to have one's poems translated into another language. A very noble effort, Asim! Hopefully, he'll fully appreciate the time and effort that you put into it.

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M. Asim Nehal 15 May 2023

I am sure you will like it, poet did full justice using appropriate metaphor. I appreciate your kind gesture and encouraging words.

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2023

An amazing poem.I will surely read Freni Karaluthara's original poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 15 May 2023

Thanks much Bharati ji, I read this poem from your notification message. You have already read and commented on it on 12th -May.

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