Saturday, June 13, 2020

Poesy Comments

Rating: 5.0

My girl would you go with me,
in an alley, where solitude blooms?
I feel your love in stealthy glance,
in the quietly burning candle in my soul.
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Freni Karaluthara
COMMENTS
Darren Jkoeryo 08 August 2023

I liked your poesy. The way you thought about poem is unique and wonderful. I give you 5 Stars for this and by the way I read it's Hindi version first hence I thank the translator here as well.

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

Dear Darren Jkoeryo, I wanted to express my sincere gratitude for your kind words and appreciation of my poem. Your feedback brings me lots of happiness.

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Sheeya Hacks 18 May 2023

Full 5 Stars and many more for this wonderful poem. Keep writing such heartful poems. To my Fav list.

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Thanks for your encouraging comment. I am so pleased to have it.

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Sheeya Hacks 18 May 2023

To imagine and write is wonderful way of expression, I fell in love with poesy long back and I find many similarities in this poem. Well done, my deepest thanks to M. Asim Nehal who showed me the way to this poem - My love Poesy.

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

Dear Sheeya Hacks, I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your kind and thoughtful words. It truly warms my heart to know that you appreciated my poem and that you share a love for poesy as well.

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Freni Karaluthara 01 September 2023

Dear Sheeya Hacks, Your encouragement and support mean a lot to me, and I am truly touched by your words. Thank you for taking the time to express your thoughts.

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Rajan T Renganathan 17 May 2023

I came to read your poem after reading translation By Dr. M. Asim Nehal, this poem surely deserves recognition for two reasons, first your imagination to make your Poem a girl and then to express your thoughts through it. I suppose you wrote this poem during COVID times.

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Respected Sir, I am delighted to read your words of appreciation in the comment box. I am also extremely grateful to Dr. M. Asim Nehal for translating the poem into Hindi, thus enabling it to reach a wider audience. Thank you very much.

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A brilliant poem, from a most talented poet. personifying the poesy and Addressing the poesy as one's lover is an absolute brilliant idea. This makes the poem extraordinarily beautiful

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Thank you Sir. I am so happy to have your generous comment on my poem.

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Deepak S S 16 May 2023

Well, after reading translation of your poem, I came to read here, this is brilliant poem, Full applause.

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I sincerely appreciate your comment on my poem. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read my poem. Thank you very much.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2023

As a big fan of Pablo Neruda, I concur with the comments and sentiments of Dr Swain. Freni, Belated Heartiest Of Congratulations On POD!

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Thank you, Richard Wlodarski, for your kind words and for your support and encouragement.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 May 2023

Full Marks, indeed poem is a solace in many problems of life but also full gathering of our Love for life in our life. Full Marks and most deserving!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 May 2023

I noted that this poem has been chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day on 19 June 2020. CONGRATULATIONS for your poem and for you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 May 2023

I have greatest love for poetry, but you call it your girl. This metaphor is composed in greatest brliiance, no wife needed, only poesy. A marvelous statement and metaphored poem.5 Full Stars. I have enjoyed tremendously, Freni. God's Blessings in Abundance

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Dear respected Sylvia Frances, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your generous praise and congratulations on my poem. Your kind words have filled my heart with joy, and I am truly grateful for your blessings. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 May 2023

I just come across your lovely poem this morning, how I did not find earlier, I don't know the reason

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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

This is one of your best poem, to date. I would like to translate it in Hindi for wider audience to read and enjoy the virtues of Poetry. Full *****

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Hello, I am happy to hear that you liked my poem. It would be a pleasure for me if you translate it into Hindi. Many poetry enthusiasts would enjoy reading it.

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Bharati Nayak 12 May 2023

A marvelous poems! Your love for poetry finds excellent expression.

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Thanks for your encouraging words!

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Chinedu Dike 06 April 2021

Beautiful love poem, very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart.

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freni karaluthara 10 April 2021

Dear Chinedu Dike, thank you for taking time to read my poem and comment on it. it is encouraging!

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Aufie Zophy 19 February 2021

The images you chose are absolutely adorable. A poem that touches the reader's heart

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Freni Karaluthara 10 April 2021

Aufie Zophy, thank you for taking time to read my poem and comment on it. it is encourageing!

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me poet yeps poet 10 January 2021

I'm glad u have a gals company now do read my poem please MOMS SMILES KINDLY

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 June 2020

Commitment in love with poesy abundantly visible through out the beautiful poem. Heartiest Congratulations on poem of the day.

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Freni Karaluthara 20 June 2020

Thank you Ratnakar for your wonderful comment. I so happy that you liked my poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 June 2020

My girl I see through your eyes, the world with its magical beauty. Singing of birds, enchanting streams, glory of flowers, splendor of nature. your poets notes are key in understanding your poem. or else you can be easily misunderstood. this world is evil...... always give poets notes. a very fine literally good and poetically excellent. tony

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Freni Karaluthara 20 June 2020

Thank you tony that you were kind to take time read and comment on my poem. I would give author's note, as you said. Thank you

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 June 2020

Go with me" , I speak to your soul. I hide my grief in pondered verse. Unnoticed I weep in fine allegory, which I choose to speak to the world. It's good loving poem...pleasure to read....excellent enjoyable... Congrats... Deserve 10+

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Freni Karaluthara 20 June 2020

Dear mahtab, thank you for your inspiring comment. I am happy that you liked my poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2020

A wonderful love poem....so lovely....so intense with romantic vibes! The work resembles the works of the master of love poem...Nerudian ink! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Freni Karaluthara 19 June 2020

Thank you for the words of congratulations, for the beautiful comment....The work resembles the works of the master of love poem....so happy

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Freni Karaluthara 19 June 2020

Thank you sir for your kind appriciation for my poem. It brought me a lot of happiness. thank you.

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