My girl would you go with me,
in an alley, where solitude blooms?
I feel your love in stealthy glance,
in the quietly burning candle in my soul.
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Full 5 Stars and many more for this wonderful poem. Keep writing such heartful poems. To my Fav list.
To imagine and write is wonderful way of expression, I fell in love with poesy long back and I find many similarities in this poem. Well done, my deepest thanks to M. Asim Nehal who showed me the way to this poem - My love Poesy.
Dear Sheeya Hacks, I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your kind and thoughtful words. It truly warms my heart to know that you appreciated my poem and that you share a love for poesy as well.
Dear Sheeya Hacks, Your encouragement and support mean a lot to me, and I am truly touched by your words. Thank you for taking the time to express your thoughts.
I came to read your poem after reading translation By Dr. M. Asim Nehal, this poem surely deserves recognition for two reasons, first your imagination to make your Poem a girl and then to express your thoughts through it. I suppose you wrote this poem during COVID times.
Respected Sir, I am delighted to read your words of appreciation in the comment box. I am also extremely grateful to Dr. M. Asim Nehal for translating the poem into Hindi, thus enabling it to reach a wider audience. Thank you very much.
A brilliant poem, from a most talented poet. personifying the poesy and Addressing the poesy as one's lover is an absolute brilliant idea. This makes the poem extraordinarily beautiful
Thank you Sir. I am so happy to have your generous comment on my poem.
Well, after reading translation of your poem, I came to read here, this is brilliant poem, Full applause.
I sincerely appreciate your comment on my poem. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read my poem. Thank you very much.
As a big fan of Pablo Neruda, I concur with the comments and sentiments of Dr Swain. Freni, Belated Heartiest Of Congratulations On POD!
Thank you, Richard Wlodarski, for your kind words and for your support and encouragement.
Full Marks, indeed poem is a solace in many problems of life but also full gathering of our Love for life in our life. Full Marks and most deserving!
I noted that this poem has been chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day on 19 June 2020. CONGRATULATIONS for your poem and for you
I have greatest love for poetry, but you call it your girl. This metaphor is composed in greatest brliiance, no wife needed, only poesy. A marvelous statement and metaphored poem.5 Full Stars. I have enjoyed tremendously, Freni. God's Blessings in Abundance
Dear respected Sylvia Frances, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your generous praise and congratulations on my poem. Your kind words have filled my heart with joy, and I am truly grateful for your blessings. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
I just come across your lovely poem this morning, how I did not find earlier, I don't know the reason
This is one of your best poem, to date. I would like to translate it in Hindi for wider audience to read and enjoy the virtues of Poetry. Full *****
Hello, I am happy to hear that you liked my poem. It would be a pleasure for me if you translate it into Hindi. Many poetry enthusiasts would enjoy reading it.
A marvelous poems! Your love for poetry finds excellent expression.
Beautiful love poem, very powerfully and movingly penned from the heart.
Dear Chinedu Dike, thank you for taking time to read my poem and comment on it. it is encouraging!
The images you chose are absolutely adorable. A poem that touches the reader's heart
Aufie Zophy, thank you for taking time to read my poem and comment on it. it is encourageing!
I'm glad u have a gals company now do read my poem please MOMS SMILES KINDLY
Commitment in love with poesy abundantly visible through out the beautiful poem. Heartiest Congratulations on poem of the day.
Thank you Ratnakar for your wonderful comment. I so happy that you liked my poem.
My girl I see through your eyes, the world with its magical beauty. Singing of birds, enchanting streams, glory of flowers, splendor of nature. your poets notes are key in understanding your poem. or else you can be easily misunderstood. this world is evil...... always give poets notes. a very fine literally good and poetically excellent. tony
Thank you tony that you were kind to take time read and comment on my poem. I would give author's note, as you said. Thank you
Go with me" , I speak to your soul. I hide my grief in pondered verse. Unnoticed I weep in fine allegory, which I choose to speak to the world. It's good loving poem...pleasure to read....excellent enjoyable... Congrats... Deserve 10+
Dear mahtab, thank you for your inspiring comment. I am happy that you liked my poem.
A wonderful love poem....so lovely....so intense with romantic vibes! The work resembles the works of the master of love poem...Nerudian ink! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day!
Thank you for the words of congratulations, for the beautiful comment....The work resembles the works of the master of love poem....so happy
Thank you sir for your kind appriciation for my poem. It brought me a lot of happiness. thank you.
I liked your poesy. The way you thought about poem is unique and wonderful. I give you 5 Stars for this and by the way I read it's Hindi version first hence I thank the translator here as well.
Dear Darren Jkoeryo, I wanted to express my sincere gratitude for your kind words and appreciation of my poem. Your feedback brings me lots of happiness.